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Post by Al-pocalypse on Apr 18, 2016 8:40:27 GMT
I have had one thought, when she meets Sou she could give him a bit of a dressing down following our performance last week. And then seen as an IC reason why we pulled all the stops out over the weekend to get the missions done. I just noted this down quickly:
"++++Competent Commanders++++
"Commander Souverine." The Octopus began. "I assume you know why I've called you here."
I was in her private office, the formality and simplicity of the room reflecting its owner's personality. It was not welcoming and nothing about the Octopus' demeanor did anything to improve this welcome.
"It has only been a week since IPEC started our push for system control and I have already been flooded with a year's worth of complaints about the commanders in our employ." At this she scattered an armful of folders across the desk in front of me.
"Need I remind you that this is meant to be a subtle operation? Souvarine, you assured me that these were competent pilots, some of the best that you've found on your travels. Why, my I ask, have I had the repair bill for two station letterboxes and five outpost landing pads appear on my desk? The sector news is now full of incidents involving light transports flying dangerously; when you choose such a, distinctive, paint job, I would have hoped that you would then do all you could to make that the only reason your ship would be noticed.
"Your pet drunk seems to be racking up bounties for fun, Vex has barely been seen and Ronnie Kane has been left to do the work of four people."
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Post by Souvarine on Apr 18, 2016 10:20:54 GMT
Yes! Brilliant. Very good. We can slot this in just before she recruits Ronnie, but after the post about the Cobras (as that one shows that they've returned).
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Post by Souvarine on Apr 18, 2016 10:23:28 GMT
Actually it might need to come after she's recruited them all. For obvious reasons!
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Post by Al-pocalypse on Apr 18, 2016 10:35:29 GMT
Yes, I'm getting confused with things. I think this ties more in with recruiting RK for the liaison with the imperial Power Players role.
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Post by Souvarine on Apr 23, 2016 17:39:09 GMT
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Post by Tanith Low on Apr 24, 2016 0:48:05 GMT
I like it. Bit preachy, but the the Octopus is a bit preachy.
I love how uncomfortable it all makes Sou.
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